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View Full Version : [FFML] Strange Days Chapter 1 V. 1.1 [Ranma and friends]


Richard Robinson
3rd July 2004, 07:00 AM
"Kasumi, I brought Kimiko home tonight. I thought it might be best if
she stayed in the guest room. Seeing as how your dad is out getting
drunk with my old man." Ranma stated calmly.

" Kimiko, what an odd coincidence that is my mother's name. Of course
you can let her stay there. " Kasumi replied. Then she stepped into the
living room from the direction of the kitchen. She stood there for a
minute maybe slightly more and collapsed.

Ranma managed to catch her.

Kimiko stepped over and examined her eldest daughter. Nodding she spoke
for the first time, " Kaschan will be fine in a few minutes. She just
fainted from the shock."

Ranma commented " How unusual, she ordinarily takes everything in
stride. Well I will lay her on the couch. Do you want to sit with her
and try to waken her.?"

" Of course; Ranma. She is my little girl , even if she isn't so little
anymore. Sigh I would have liked to have been here with them or at
least watching over them more but I had things to do ( upstairs ) . I
wonder how Soun and the others will like my return, I hope they don't
want me to leave!"

" Not a chance, I know they missed you a lot. You have a place where you
are needed, in more than one way too. The techniques you learned in (
the corps up there) will serve you well here on Earth. I know a few of
them, from when I died, and I know you and Soun will be able to get many
people to study under you, just for those, not to mention the Anything
Goes Tendo school techniques. I learned a few of them and they are
better than a lot of the old man's. Crouch of the Tiger, Hundred Yen, HEH!"

Akane and Nabiki enter the room quietly for a change. Seeing someone
with Kasumi's head on her lap. They are rather shocked. Then Nabiki
looks up at some paintings of her family, then over at the Altar on the
wall. Then she runs over shouting "MOM"

Akane stares at Nabiki, in total disbelief. She doesn't really remember
her mother.

Ranma who had stepped into the Kitchen, to see if Kasumi had left
anything cooking. Casually asked " Akane aren't you going to go over and
say hello to your mom. I mean I went and returned her to life for you.
Just as I returned you to life back at Jusendo. I heard you say how much
you missed her the other day so I fixed everything up for you to have
what you wanted. "

At this point all the faces in the room turned to stare at Ranma.
Everyone had a look of total disbelief. One thought was in their heads,
He heard her and just like that he did the impossible and returned
someone to life .! Building them a new body!! Just to please his
girlfriend!!! Impossible!!!!

This is a rewrite of chapter one. I hope it is found to be superior to
the original.

Crouch of the Tiger is bowing to your opponent and asking for his mercy.
Hundred Yen is a distraction technique, you say you saw a hundred yen
piece and the hit your opponent, when he goes to look for it.
Both where invented by Genma. Both where based on his tastes and beliefs.

--
Rick Robinson
RICHARDROBINSON@prodigy.net


If violence is not solving your
problems you're just not using enough of it.

Misato

"I guess I'm just an old-fashioned sentimentalist at heart. I refuse
to accept a no-win scenario. I hate the thought of a universe without
justice. If the maneuverings of dark powers can't be exposed and
defeated by the pure of heart, then there's no point in anything. I
can't believe that."
-- Benjamin Hutchins




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