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StudioPC
24th February 2006, 08:36 PM
Disclaimer: Moldiver is owned by Pioneer Animation. No money is being
made from this, and no such intent should be inferred. The writings
of Richard C. Hoagland can be found at www.enterprisemission.com. The
following fic is based on the article; "Moon With A View".

"Reality is a group hunch." -Frank Zappa

Morning dawned clear on Tokyo in the year 2043. With long fingers,
the sun chased away the shadows, summoning the citizens from their
beds and houses, watching them as they went to work, to school.

Or in the case of the Ozora Household, Tower Three, Level 29, Ichigo
Street, being lazy.

This morning, only two people were in residence; Hiroshi Ozora, age
24 and his sister Mirai, age 20. Their parents and younger brother
were in Australia, touring schools.

Hiroshi was skinny, with unkempt hair and eyes that squinted behind
his glasses, while Mirai was slightly shorter, with long brown hair
and a figure that was partly genetics and partly the result of
borderline masochistic exercise program. Mirai made her living as a
model, and her work literally depended on her looking good.

Hiroshi, on the other hand, only needed to keep his brain in shape.
He was a technologist, currently between jobs and keeping himself
busy with consulting work.

This morning, he sat in the dining room, a spoonful of cereal in his
mouth, a palmtop in one hand, and the morning paper in the other.
With one ear, he listened to the news, the other, he listened to
Mirai, who was in the living room working out on the Isokenetic
machine with weights added in.

"Ninety-eight, ninety-nine, one hundred!" he heard her call out and
then the whine as the machine powered down and the clunk of the
weights being placed back in their holders.

Moments later, she walked in, wearing a sweat-soaked one piece outfit
that left nothing to the the imagination, and a towel around her
neck. Her hair was tied back from her forehead and she was mopping
her face with a small hand-cloth.

"Wha!" Hiroshi gaped. "Mirai!" Hiroshi wouldn't call himself a prude,
but Mirai had a tendency towards casual nudity that shocked him. He
suspected she'd work out naked if it wasn't for modesty laws and that
her figure required support and binding when doing any physical
activity.

She rolled her eyes at him and vanished into the kitchen. He heard
the fridge open and close and then Mirai returned, bottle of water in
hand and wearing a lightweight robe.

"Prude," she chided, opening the bottle and drinking deep.

"I'm not a prude," he replied, setting the paper down. "But really,
Mirai, don't you think you--" he broke off as the door bell rang.
"Who could that be? He asked, getting up.

Opening the door, he stared at the two men. Both wore identical dark
suits and one of them carried a briefcase. "Hiroshi Ozora?"

"Yeah?"

"My name is Tom Smith and this is William Lee Jones. We're with the
International Space Commission and we'd like to speak to you and your
sister. May we come in?"

"Sure," Hiroshi said and stood aside. "Mirai! Company!"

He led the two men into the living room and moments later, Mirai came
out, now dressed in a blouse and jeans.

"We'll get straight to the point," Smith said.

"We know about Moldiver," Jones said. "We know that Amagi was
Machinegal, and did not, as Amagi Corp is telling people, that he was
killed in a Jetcoptor accident."

Mirai's face was as hard as stone and and she had slipped one hand
into her pocket.

"What do you want?" Hiroshi said, grabbing his sister's wrist. "Like
you said, get to the point."

"Are either of you familiar with the writings of Richard Hoagland?"
Jones asked.

"I've seen him cited on a few conspiracy theory sites," Hiroshi said.
"Went to Cydonia once in college. He popularized the face on Mars
theory, didn't he?"

Smith nodded. "He and his team were considered crackpots, but they
maintained their position until the very end. The point, Mister
Ozora, is that he was right, and we need Moldiver's help."

"But there is no face!" Hiroshi said. "I've been to the Cydonia plain."

"No, you haven't," Jones said. "The real Cydonia is about a hundred
miles southeast. You should both feel special, you're about to be let
in on one of the biggest secrets in history."

"There is a face?" Mirai asked.

Smith nodded. "A face, a city under the Martian Ice, evidence of
ancient astronauts, the whole thing. Aliens seeding Earth with life
and the asteroid belt is the remains of a planet aside, everything
points to the fact that Hoagland was one hundred percent right, and
there's just one thing left to prove, which is where the two of you
come in."

Mirai removed her hand from her pocket as the siblings exchanged
glances.

"Go on," Hiroshi said in a guarded tone.

Jones opened the case, revealing a holo projector.

"July Twentieth, Nineteen Sixty-Nine," Smith said. "Neil Armstrong
and Buzz Aldrin became the first human beings on the Moon. During
their moonwalks, they found the remains of a structure several miles
north of the landing site. Radioing back to Earth for instructions,
they were instructed to take photos and then return immeditly to
Earth. Their find was hidden from public knowledge and the president
briefed."

"History records that were seventeen Apollo Missions," Jones said.
"But in reality there were twenty, three launched from Russian soil
in order to hide their real purpose, which was to find out that
structure was."

"The only clues we found were several samples of writing," Smith
said, "in what we now know to be an archaic form of Sumerian but with
Akkadian and Elamite mixed in. All now extinct languages. It's
suspected that those three languages descended from this one mother
tongue."

Jones took up the tale. "In Twenty-Seventeen, when Humans landed on
Mars, one of the first priorities was to verify the Face. History
says that no face was found."

"And reality?" Hiroshi said.

"We found way more than Hoagland ever suspected. There's at least
three cities on Mars, all demonstrating a clear Sumerian architecture
and more than enough writings to prove that there's a connection."
Jones leaned forward. "At least one of those structures was a
spaceport. There's also what appears to be an underground subway
system, possibly covering the entire planet. The buildings were also
patrolled by guard robots of some kind. Very fast, programmed to
kill. Some very good people died before we could figure out how to
kill them."

Smith took a deep breath. "We also found several functioning vid-
screen, showing humans issuing warnings, or at least that's what we
think based on the tone of voice. We can't understand what the
warning is, but it sounds bad."

"Wait," Hiroshi said. "Are you telling me that human beings at one
point had the technology and ability to go to the Moon and Mars, and
build cities? What the hell happened?"

"We wish we knew," Smith said. "What we do know is that it happened a
long, long time ago, and devastated the entire solar system."

"You still haven't explained what this has to do with us," Hiroshi said.

"Hoagland maintained that through what he called Hyperdimensional
Physics, Saturn, or more specifically, it's moon Iapetus, held clues
to our own origins. He cited it's unusual orbit, its strange 'yin-
yang' coloring, hexagonal shaped craters, and what appeared to be a
headronistic shape. He said that Iapetus was an artificial object
created for some purpose. He suggested an Ark, a seedship from
somewhere outside the solar system, a warship, or perhaps some kind
of resort."

"Now that the manned colony on Ganymede is up and running, the ISC
wants to start exploring Saturn. Those of us in the know want answers
to what we've come to call Hoagland's Riddle."

"And for that, we need to go to Iapetus."

"I see," Hiroshi said. "You want Moldiver along in case Iapetus is
really an artificial world and there's more of those guard things.
She's invulnerable, so they can't hurt her while she deals with them."

"Actually," Smith said, "we're more worried that whatever knocked
humanity back into the Stone Age is still around and wants to do it
again. We need to be able fight back, and your invention is our best
shot at that."

"So why not steal it?"

"It was suggested, but on the other hand, what's better? Wasting time
and energy trying to reverse engineer and duplicate the work and then
training someone in its use, or recruiting the inventor and someone
who already knows it backwards and forwards?"

Hiroshi frowned. He couldn't argue with that.

The two men stood up. "We understand that this is a big decision,"
Jones said. "So we'll leave you to think this over." Smith closed up
the projector and Jones set a card on the table. "If you decide yes,
call this number."

The two men let themselves out and the Ozoras stayed where they were,
staring at the table. The business card and the briefcase stared back.

Night had fallen when Mirai finally spoke. "Let's do it." She turned
to look at him. "I mean it Hiroshi, let's call the number, say yes."

"I dunno . . ."

"Oh come on," Mirai cajoled. "Think about it. This is like, the
scientific discovery of the millennium! Even if it's not aliens, it's
still so cool."

"Be serious, Mirai, this is a trap of some kind. It's absurd."

"Look at me, Hiroshi, look me in the eye and tell me you really,
honestly, believe that.

"I . . ." The words died in his throat and he found himself unable to
maintain eye contact. "I want to believe," he whispered as he stared
at the card on the table. The numbers beckoned to him, called,
whispering a siren song of promise and adventure.

Mirai watched him as he thought and thought. "I'll tell you in the
morning," he said and disappeared into his room, leaving Mirai alone.

* * * *

Hiroshi did not sleep. He spent the entire night searching, trying to
find any verification of Smith and Jones' absurd and insane story.
The first step was to dismantle the holoprojector. It was a stock
model, no bugs or recording devices and there was nothing in it's
data module that could be called malicious, that he could find anyway.

Leaving that alone for a bit, he dove into the information mines of
the 'net. He checked forums, searched using any terms he could think
of and dug as deep as he could.

Finally, he was forced to admit that if Smith and Jones were part of
a clever, well laid trap, they'd done their homework. Hoagland had
really said those things and there was rumors and theories that the
maps of Mars had been tampered with to hide the existence of the
Face. He'd also found rumors that Armstrong and Aldrin had found
something on the Moon. So that matched what they'd been told.

There was also no rumors about Moldiver's real identity. Which begged
the question of how the ISC knew about Mirai, and if they knew, who
else?

He wanted to believe them, God, he wanted to, but a tiny, paranoid
part of him refused. The story carried no logic, no basis in fact,
and it made no logical sense to bury something this big and be able
to keep it buried, for almost a hundred years.

Sighing, he stretched out on the floor of his room and stared at the
ceiling.

Occam's Razor combined with Shrodinger's Cat. The simplest
explanation was that Jones and Smith had told the truth, but the only
way he would know for sure is to open the box. That is, call the
number and follow through.

On the other hand, if it was a trap, he'd be handing them the Mol-
unit on a silver platter.

And he still had no idea how they knew about Mirai.

He must have dozed off, because the next thing he knew, Mirai was
standing over him.

"Hiroshi," she said. "I'm going. At the very least, I'm going."

"What if it's a trap?"

"What if it isn't? What if there is something out there waiting to
destroy us? I'm not going to sit here and wait for it, Hiroshi."

He thought of the reasons he'd created the unit in the first place
and sighed.

"No," he said and grinned. "No you can't, and damnit, neither can I.
All right, I'll call the number. Leave the mol-unit with me."

She smiled, and set the card-sized device on his chest. "I have to go
to work, bye!"

Hiroshi sat back up, made himself a cup of extra-strength coffee and
went back to work.

Step one was give himself some insurance. There was a subculture on
the internet where information was the coin of the realm, and for the
right info, you could get anything you wanted. Hiroshi was at the
edges, but he was owed a few favors and called one in. He contacted
one of them who he knew only by their handle; SilkyStingray, and
transmitted the data module along with an explanation. He left out
the part about Moldiver, but told them everything else. The bargain
was straightforward; If you don't hear back from me in two years,
assume I'm dead and do what you like with this. They agreed on a
password and that was that. Hiroshi then reassembled the briefcase
and set it aside before making something to eat.

The next step was the Mol-unit. He reconfigured the unit to only
activate in the presence of his or Mirai's brainwaves and then, he
removed the limiter.

He didn't care for the idea and was putting an awful lot of trust in
his sister. The limiter's sole purpose had been to prevent abuse of
the power the Mol-unit bestowed. But that had been when he thought it
was going to be used only on or around Earth, where it would've been
easy to find a safe spot to land if time ran out.

For her safety, and because where they were going was no place for
time limits, he took it out and prayed.

Finally, he retrieved the card and made the call.

"Jones."

"This is Hiroshi Ozora, we accept."

"Excellent. Tell no one."

"Not a problem," Hiroshi lied with a straight face.

"You'll get tickets and vouchers, along with instructions in the
mail. We appreciate this, Ozora. Welcome aboard."

Jones hung up.

"Yeah," Hiroshi said to the phone as he hung up. "I bet we are."

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Bert Miller
25th February 2006, 01:16 AM
Wow, a Moldiver fanfic! Sugoi!

Quoting StudioPC <studiopc (AT) sbcglobal (DOT) net>:

> Morning dawned clear on Tokyo in the year 2043.

Hmm... okay, starting two years before the OAV series...

> With long fingers, the sun chased away the shadows,

I think that's supposed to be "the dawn's rosy-tipped
fingers"

>
> Or in the case of the Ozora Household, Tower Three,
> Level 29, Ichigo Street, being lazy.

Supplying an actual address; good move!

>
> This morning, only two people were in residence;
> Hiroshi Ozora, age 24 and his sister Mirai, age 20.
> Their parents and younger brother were in Australia,
> touring schools.

Huh? The story takes place two years before the OAVs,
but the characters are three years older than they are
in the OAVs? What gives?


>
> borderline masochistic exercise program. Mirai made
> her living as a model, and her work literally depended
> on her looking good.

This seems to be quite common in what little Moldiver
fanfic exists out there, to put Mirai into a career
based on the fact that she enters beauty contests in the
first OAV. I've always found it a bit disappointing,
personally; she's characterized as being very savvy
technically, if not on a par with her world-beating
brothers.


> He was a technologist, currently between jobs and
> keeping himself busy with consulting work.

Suggest "engineer" of some sort (despite the OAVs' use
of the word "technologist", which I didn't care for).
You might supply a type we don't have today for
verisimilitude, e.g. nanoscopic engineer, zero-field
energy engineer.


> Moments later, she walked in, wearing a sweat-soaked
> one piece outfit that left nothing to the the

Two "the"s in a row there.




> imagination, and a towel around her neck.

I found this bit kind of odd. I don't see anything in
the OAVs to justify its being there in the original,
which means you introduced it for some plot-related
reason. But, at least in this chapter, you don't seem
to do anything with it.


>
> Opening the door, he stared at the two men. Both wore
> identical dark suits...
<clip>
> "My name is Tom Smith and this is William Lee Jones.

Men In Black, huh? Suggest you add sunglasses.


> "We know about Moldiver," Jones said. "We know that
> Amagi was Machinegal, and did not, as Amagi Corp is
> telling people, that he was killed in a Jetcoptor
> accident."

Okay, clearly the story is supposed to take place in
2048 or thereabouts, not 2043. Also, there's a grammar
problem with the above. Suggest "and did not, as Amagi
Corp said, die in a Jetcopter crash".

Now you've make me curious about the fate of the Dolls,
assuming he brought them back from the end of Episode
Six as implied.


>
> "There is a face?" Mirai asked.
>
> Smith nodded. "A face, a city under the Martian Ice,
> evidence of ancient astronauts, the whole thing.

Okay... and exactly WHY has the government concealed all
this for decades? You never have the MIB offer an
explanation, but surely this would be the first thing
Hiroshi and Mirai would ask for.


> said, "in what we now know to be an archaic form of
> Sumerian but with Akkadian and Elamite mixed in. All
> now extinct languages.

Extinct Semitic languages. Man, can you imagine what
the fundamentalists would make of something like this!
"See! Hebrew really IS the original tongue of mankind!"

> There's at least three cities on Mars, all
> demonstrating a clear Sumerian architecture and more
> than enough writings to prove that there's a
> connection."
> Jones leaned forward. "At least one of those
> structures was a spaceport. There's also what appears
> to be an underground subway system, possibly covering
> the entire planet.

At this point I am inclined to suspect you're planning
a Sailor Moon backstory tie-in, or perhaps a tie-in with
Battlestar Galactica.


> Smith took a deep breath. "We also found several
> functioning vid-screen, showing humans issuing
> warnings, or at least that's what we think based on
> the tone of voice. We can't understand what the
> warning is, but it sounds bad."

Hmmm... Nobody could decipher an extinct Semitic
language in thirty years? Given enough of a sampling,
this seems very implausible. Suggest instead that they
KNOW it's a warning, but can't figure out of what, as
the technical words have no common roots.

>
> "Wait," Hiroshi said. "Are you telling me that human
> beings at one point had the technology and ability to
> go to the Moon and Mars, and build cities? What the
> hell happened?"

Heh-heh-heh! Queen Beryl's Cylons rose up and slew all
the humans, except those who'd fled to primitive Earth,
the tenth colony!


> Physics, Saturn, or more specifically, it's moon
> Iapetus, held clues to our own origins. He cited it's
> unusual orbit, its strange 'yin-yang' coloring,
> hexagonal shaped craters, and what appeared to be a
> headronistic shape. He said that Iapetus was an
> artificial object created for some purpose. He
> suggested an Ark, a seedship from somewhere outside
> the solar system, a warship, or perhaps some kind
> of resort."

(sp) You twice use "it's" where you want "its", the
possessive.

"headronistic"? Is that a word?

And, of course, they're right! Iapetus was placed there
by the black monolith as a gateway, back when humans
were first raised from apes by the monolith!


> there was nothing in it's data module that could be

Again, that "it's" should be "its"


> and it made no logical sense to bury something this
> big and be able to keep it buried, for almost a
> hundred years.

Quite true. Impossible, given human nature. Which
implies that something else is going on here. But why
didn't Hiroshi ask for a reason for all the secrecy
while the MIB were still around? Or Mirai?

> one of them who he knew only by their handle;
> SilkyStingray, and transmitted the data module along
> with an explanation.

Now this is promising: a BGC crossover, with Sylia
either about 38 or about 30 depending on whether you're
using BGC Classic or BGC 2040.


Well, let's see; what do I think overall? Intriguing
enough to keep reading, which is the important thing.
I have no idea where you're going, other than that there
must be some external threat out there someplace.

I think you can do more in the first chapter, though;
you could hook your readers much more than you actually
do here by adding a few things. Here's a short list
(some may not work, depending on where you're going, but
I of course am not privy to that):

1) Characterization: frankly, I think leaving Nozomu
out may have been a mistake. You could do a lot with
him, given how much he'd have changed in the last 3
years. But, given your decision, suggest filling out
Mirai and Hiroshi a bit more. Who are they? What do
they want? What will they do, given sufficient reason,
and what won't they do? (You hint that Mirai killed
Amagi, but don't outright say so. If she did, suggest
the MIB know, and tell, what Amagi's plans were, thereby
telling us what would cause Mirai to kill.) You've
given us little reason to care what happens to them;
what are their insecurities? Their fears? Their
dreams?

2) Backstory: one proven way to hook readers good is
to provide not just forward-looking mysteries, which
you've done (in spades), but backward-looking ones. You
might, for instance, have Hiroshi and Mirai refer to
some events of the last three years in terms which leave
your readership dying to know more. For instance, you
could have Hiroshi wonder whether some of the things he
and/or Mirai have found out in the last three years are
related to the MIB's story. Maybe they've seen evidence
of massive government cover-ups, or mysterious high tech
in unforeseen places, or hints that Amagi's surviving
androids work for the ISC.

3) Depending on how long you want your story to be, I'd
think about introducing a subplot in chapter 1 (or, at
least, something that appears to be an unrelated
subplot). The only thing that happens here is that
Hiroshi and Mirai agree to go with the MIB expedition.




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StudioPC
25th February 2006, 07:01 AM
On Feb 24, 2006, at 5:16 PM, Bert Miller wrote:

> Wow, a Moldiver fanfic! Sugoi!

You're welcome!

> Huh? The story takes place two years before the OAVs,
> but the characters are three years older than they are
> in the OAVs? What gives?

Easy. I'm a moron who didn't check facts and got years confused. In
atonement, I shall now beat myself in the head repeatedly with the
revised and simplified tax guide. The resulting brain damage will
mean in a delay in fics. The management apologizes for the inconvience.

*WHAM* *WHAM* *WHAM* *WHAM* *WHAM* *WHAM* *WHAM* *WHAM*

I'm only tee and a haf years old!

>> borderline masochistic exercise program. Mirai made
>> her living as a model, and her work literally depended
>> on her looking good.
>
> This seems to be quite common in what little Moldiver
> fanfic exists out there, to put Mirai into a career
> based on the fact that she enters beauty contests in the
> first OAV. I've always found it a bit disappointing,
> personally; she's characterized as being very savvy
> technically, if not on a par with her world-beating
> brothers.

The impression I got wasn't that Mirai was dumb, but more that she
prefers the spotlight and the acclaim. She's probably on par with
Hiroshi, technology just bores her.

>> He was a technologist, currently between jobs and
>> keeping himself busy with consulting work.
>
> Suggest "engineer" of some sort (despite the OAVs' use
> of the word "technologist", which I didn't care for).
> You might supply a type we don't have today for
> verisimilitude, e.g. nanoscopic engineer, zero-field
> energy engineer.

Yeah, it bugged me too. But if I don't, then the canon nazis around
here come down on me like a ton of bricks.

> I found this bit kind of odd. I don't see anything in
> the OAVs to justify its being there in the original,
> which means you introduced it for some plot-related
> reason. But, at least in this chapter, you don't seem
> to do anything with it.

Nope. Not plot element there, just good old fashioned fanservice.

>> Opening the door, he stared at the two men. Both wore
>> identical dark suits...
> <clip>
>> "My name is Tom Smith and this is William Lee Jones.
>
> Men In Black, huh? Suggest you add sunglasses.
>
>
>> "We know about Moldiver," Jones said. "We know that
>> Amagi was Machinegal, and did not, as Amagi Corp is
>> telling people, that he was killed in a Jetcoptor
>> accident."
>
> Okay, clearly the story is supposed to take place in
> 2048 or thereabouts, not 2043. Also, there's a grammar
> problem with the above. Suggest "and did not, as Amagi
> Corp said, die in a Jetcopter crash".
>
> Now you've make me curious about the fate of the Dolls,
> assuming he brought them back from the end of Episode
> Six as implied.

They died with him, that's all I'll say.

>>
>> "There is a face?" Mirai asked.
>>
>> Smith nodded. "A face, a city under the Martian Ice,
>> evidence of ancient astronauts, the whole thing.
>
> Okay... and exactly WHY has the government concealed all
> this for decades? You never have the MIB offer an
> explanation, but surely this would be the first thing
> Hiroshi and Mirai would ask for.

Point, though in my opinion, most people would assume that they did
because they could. It's a long standing opinion in conspiracy
circles, I'm told, that the goverment is too afraid of being
overthrown by a rioting public, so they hush up everything and
anything they can.

The cynics would simply snort and go "Of course. S.O.B.'s never tell
us a damn thing."

>> said, "in what we now know to be an archaic form of
>> Sumerian but with Akkadian and Elamite mixed in. All
>> now extinct languages.
>
> Extinct Semitic languages. Man, can you imagine what
> the fundamentalists would make of something like this!
> "See! Hebrew really IS the original tongue of mankind!"
>
>> There's at least three cities on Mars, all
>> demonstrating a clear Sumerian architecture and more
>> than enough writings to prove that there's a
>> connection."
>> Jones leaned forward. "At least one of those
>> structures was a spaceport. There's also what appears
>> to be an underground subway system, possibly covering
>> the entire planet.
>
> At this point I am inclined to suspect you're planning
> a Sailor Moon backstory tie-in, or perhaps a tie-in with
> Battlestar Galactica.

Nope. Though I hadn't thought about BG. But no, this is pure
Moldiver. You should check out Hoagland's site when you have some
time to kill, though. He's pretty much lost his mind, but he's got
some fascinating theories all the same.

>> Smith took a deep breath. "We also found several
>> functioning vid-screen, showing humans issuing
>> warnings, or at least that's what we think based on
>> the tone of voice. We can't understand what the
>> warning is, but it sounds bad."
>
> Hmmm... Nobody could decipher an extinct Semitic
> language in thirty years? Given enough of a sampling,
> this seems very implausible. Suggest instead that they
> KNOW it's a warning, but can't figure out of what, as
> the technical words have no common roots.

To this day, the oldest known language is a form of Sumerian, though
no one can read or speak it. The other two are the same way,
according to this site.

http://www.crystalinks.com/sumerlanguage.html

>> Physics, Saturn, or more specifically, it's moon
>> Iapetus, held clues to our own origins. He cited it's
>> unusual orbit, its strange 'yin-yang' coloring,
>> hexagonal shaped craters, and what appeared to be a
>> headronistic shape. He said that Iapetus was an
>> artificial object created for some purpose. He
>> suggested an Ark, a seedship from somewhere outside
>> the solar system, a warship, or perhaps some kind
>> of resort."
>
> (sp) You twice use "it's" where you want "its", the
> possessive.
>
> "headronistic"? Is that a word?

It is now.

> And, of course, they're right! Iapetus was placed there
> by the black monolith as a gateway, back when humans
> were first raised from apes by the monolith!

So Davey and Hal should be hanging around somewheres.

> Now this is promising: a BGC crossover, with Sylia
> either about 38 or about 30 depending on whether you're
> using BGC Classic or BGC 2040.

Nope. Just a cameo.

> Well, let's see; what do I think overall? Intriguing
> enough to keep reading, which is the important thing.
> I have no idea where you're going, other than that there
> must be some external threat out there someplace.

Well something blew the human race back to the Stone Age and it may
or may not be dead yet.

Thanks for the C&C

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